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OnedayIwasabouttogooutsidetoplaywhenIsawmymotherbeingbusywithseveralhouseworkatthesametime.Shelookedsotired,andIfeltguilty,ThereforeImadeadeterminationtosharehouseworkwithher.Iwasabouttowashtheclotheswhenmyfriendcalledmeupandaskedmetoplaywithher.ItoldherthatIwouldgoontheconditionthatcompletingmywashing.ThenIgoonwashing,OnlythendidIrealizeditwassuchatiringthingtowashclothes,andhowtiredmymotherwas.Whilemymothernotonlyworkedoutsidebutalsotooktheresponsibilityofourhouseworkinside,shenevercomplainttous.AfterwashingIfelttiredthough,mymotherpraisedme,andsaidthatIwasagoodchild.Ifelthappy.