英语作文修改
这是一篇回信我写的老师说有很多错误求高手一一修改和说明原因谢谢了!
DearLucy,
Whatyousaidiscommonwithsomemiddleschoolstudents.Hereismyadvice.
Don'tbeshy.Youshouldbecomeoutgoing.Atfirst,youmusttalkwithother,makealotoffriends.Sometimes,youcangetsomehelpfromyourclassmatesandfriends,becausetheyarehavethesameageasyou.It'seasytounderstandeachother.Ontheotherhand,youcangetsomehelpfromyourteachersandparents,becausetheyarefulloflovingandkind.They'rehavelotsofgoodexperience.Takeiteasy.It'snothardtodoit.
Hopeyoucangetoutofyourtroublesoon.
Yours,
Peter
那个有句改成becausetheyarefulloflove