一篇初二水平的英语作文.希望大家找找哪有有错误告诉我订正.
IsAfamilyteachernecessary.
Moreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsaregoingtohavingfamilyteacher.Somepeoplethinkthatitisnecessary.Buttheyarealsosomepeopledon'tagree.
Inmyopinion,Ipreferthesecondviewpoint.Firstofall,studentsneedsomerestattheweekend.Thansomefamilyteachersareinthepurposeofmakingmoney.Therefore,familyteacherisnotnecessary.Wecanstudywellifwehardworking.
如果还有错的地方告诉我,已经改了某些地方,但本人英语水平不好,错的地方也找不出来.