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请大家给我的托福作文评评分41.Somepeoplethinkthathumanneedsforfarmland,housing,andindustryaremoreimportantthansavinglandforendangeredanimals.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththispointofview?Whyorwhynot?Usespecificrea
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41.Somepeoplethinkthathumanneedsforfarmland,housing,andindustryaremoreimportantthansavinglandforendangeredanimals.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththispointofview?Whyorwhynot?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

Many,maintainingthisviewpointthatit'spriortomeethumanneedsforfarmland,housing,andindustry,claimthatitiswethatdominatetheEarthsothatitisfairlyreasonabletoconsiderourselvesfirst.Iconcedetheiropinion,frommyperspective,rescuinganimalswhicharefacingextinctionandofferingthemasuitablehabitatisthemostsignificant.

Theprimaryreasontosupportmyopinionisthatdiversityisindispensableinthenature.Wecannotlivebyourselveswithoutotherspecies.Onlyfocusingoureyesonourinterestsandignoringanimals’righttolivewillsoonerorlaterputourselvesinanendangeredsituation.Forinstance,ifwecutdownalltheforests,allkindsofbirdswillhavetoexileandevengetaccesstothegateofdeath.Thenwhatwillhappen?Imaginethathowfastinsectswillreproducewithoutbeingcapturedbybirds.Andwhat'smore?Theinsectswillbringacatastrophetothefarmlandwhichwehaveploughedfromgenerationtogeneration.Consequentlyitiscrucialforpeopletoguaranteethediversityandkeepthebalanceofnature.

Tobackupmypoint,itcouldberelevanttoincludeanothercausethatsavinglandforanimalsinfactcouldenhancetheoverallstandardofourliving.Fewwoulddisputethatitwillbeveryterribletoliveinagiganticmonsterofconcreteandverylonelytoliveinafarmlandsurroundingwithonlyagriculturalmachines.Nevertheless,ifweensureasoundhabitatforanimals,thesituationcouldbetotallydifferent.Thereisnobetterillustrationtoprovethisideathantheexampleofthewildzoowhichprovidesafertilelandforwildanimalsandsimultaneouslycreatesastageforhumanandanimalstocommunicate.Theharmonybetweenhumanandotheranimalsisoneofthemostvitaltopicsintheworld.Thereforeinordertoreachtheharmony,wecertainlycouldnotputthesettlementproblemofanimalsaside.

Fromalltheevidencementionedabovecomesthisnaturalsummarythatwehumanoughttoownforesightforthefutureandholdanindiscriminatel

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