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DoYouAgreethatRockIstheMusicofTeenageRebellion?
SomepeoplethinkthatRockisthemusicofteenagerebellionbecausemanyrockstarssangofdissatisfactiontothesociety.Oftentheyopenlycriticizewhatisknownasthe“adultworld”,withallitsdullroutinesandclichés.Theyexpressedteenager’sownopinionofpolitics,sociallife,etc.Suchexpressionbroughtonclashesofideasbetweendifferentgenerations.
Yetothersdisagreewiththeopinion,believingthatRockmusicisnomorethanapuremusicalforce.Theybelievein“artforart’ssake”,andthinkthatweshouldtakeRockmoreasastyleofmusicthanaforumofdebate.
Inmypointofview,theRockmusichasbecomeanimportantchannelofexpressionfortheyoungergenerationsofthewesternworld,aswellasanoutletforthegrowingtensionmodernpeopleareburdenedwith.Itisaplacewhereteenagersdefineandredefinetheirfeelingsandbelieves,andintheprocessformtheirownvalues.Thesevaluessometimesinfluencetheirentiregeneration,andthroughthatthesocietyasawhole.Thus,IdobelievethattheRockmusicisawayforyoungpeopletoexpress—evensometimes“rebel”againsttheirelders,butthis“rebellion”canbebeneficialifguidedintherightway.