一段英文,求修改挑错.Iwouldliketosay,wehavetobesteady.Perhapsinthisenormousworld,youarejustalittlescrew.Andonlyifyoukeepastiffupperlip,holdingyourdreaminthehand,you’llbeabletogettoyourRuritania.Justlike
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一段英文,求修改挑错.
Iwouldliketosay,wehavetobesteady.Perhapsinthisenormousworld,youarejustalittlescrew.Andonlyifyoukeepastiffupperlip,holdingyourdreaminthehand,you’llbeabletogettoyourRuritania.JustlikeLeifeng,whowasonlyanordinaryperson,butalsoagreatone,servedmanypeopledayinanddayout.Throughhispersistence,herealizedhisownvalueoflife.Onlyifyoubeinsistent,yourlifewillbemeaningful;andonlyifyoubepersistent,youwillgetclosertoyourdreamstepbystep.
Thisisjustlikewhatwefacetoday.Nowwearecountingdowntohaveourfinalexam,atoweringpeakofourthreeyears’schoollife.Ifyoucouldoverlookyourfutureatthismoment,youwoulddefinitelybecometoughandbeabletofighttoothandnail.Inthisway,youwillhaveabrighteryouth,andcreateamoremeaningfullife.
一些不地道或是语法有错的地方请及时指教!
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1.Iwouldliketosay,wehavetobesteady.逗号改成that,因为一个句子中只能有一个动词,两个以上就要有连词,此句没有连词,加上that,构成宾语从句.
2.JustlikeLeifeng,whowasonlyanordinaryperson,only改成just,你的意思是只是一个普通人,所以用just表示“只是”而非only.
3.JustlikeLeifeng,whowasonlyanordinaryperson,butalsoagreatone,这句话有歧义,你是想表达就像雷锋,不但是一个普通人,而且是一个伟大的人吗?可是在中文的表达上是不通的.
4.Onlyifyoubeinsistent,be改成are,因为,insistent是形容词.
5.youwoulddefinitelybecometoughandbeabletofighttoothandnail.Inthisway,应该是wouldhavebecome,be改成been,因为是虚拟语气.
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