英语老师请进,这是初三的英语作文,你会打几分?满分:15
Everybodyneedslove.Itisimportantofpeople.WhenIwasakid,myparentswerebusywiththemjob.SoIalwaysfeelLonely.Butfriendwaschangedmylife!WhenIstarttogotoschool,Imissmyparents,soIcannothelpcrying.WhentheVictorshowup,Ialsofeelsad.Hetoldjokeswithme,andplaygamewithme.SoIchangedalot,Ibecomeanoutgoingboy.x05x05x05x05Thankyou,friend!Iwillrememberthefriendshipforever.
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