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HowtoEnsureFoodSafety
1、近年来,中国食品安全事件层了不穷,“问题食品”多,范围广,后果严重,已经到了令人谈“食”色变的地步；
2、问题食品出现的原因；
3、你认为如何才能保障“食品安全”?
Theseyears,toomanyfoodsafetyincidentsoccurredinourcountry.Forinstance,someillegalbusinessmenaddedthemelamineintomilk;manyrestaurantswerereporteduseswill-cookeddirtyoilwhichrecycledfromwasterwaterdrainandcontainsmuchvirusandinpureties,andsomechemicalinpuretiescouldcausecancers.
Whytherearesomanyfoodsafetyproblemshappened?
First,somebusinessmengoafterthebiggestprofitwithoutanyprinciplesandbusinessmoral,theyeverignorecustomers’health.
Second,thefoodAdministrationBureauislackofinspectingandmonitoringthecommercialfood.
Third,manycustomersdon’tpayattentiontothesafetyissues.
Inordertosolvethisproblem?First,theFoodAdministrationbureauofgovernmentshouldimprovetheinspectionandmonitorthealltheprocessofthefood,andfinetheviolentbehaves,moreover,governmentshouldtrainthebusinessmenandmanufactures’factorytoberesponsibleforcustomers’health,
Second,customersshouldnoticemoresafetysituationoffood.Suchasheckthe“QC”marksandthemainingredientsofthefoodetc.
Thenthefoodsafetywillbeimprovedgradually.
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