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Hobbies
Doyouhaveahobby?Whatdoyoudoinyourfreetime?Ithinkhobbiesareveryimportantforus,becausewehavemanytimeforourhobbieseveryafternoon.AndtodayIwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyhobbies.
Ilikeswimmingandplayingbasketball,theyarebothsport,becauseIthinkdosportcanmakememorehealthandmoreactive.Ioftenplaybasketballwithmyyoungbrotherintheafternoonat5:00.Heistwoyearsyoungerthanme,butheismuchtallerthanme,soIcannotshootfacetoface,Ihavetocrossoverhimtomakeabetterchance.ButIcannotcrossoverhimeverytime,solikeyouimagine,itisveryinteresting.
Weplaybasketballforanhour,andthenmyfatherpicksupusandwegotoswimpool.Mybrotherplaywithotherpeopleinthechildpool.AndIswimwithmymind,althoughIamverytiredafterplayingbasketball.
Ilikereadingtoo,butlonlyreadintheeveningoratnight.BecauseIdonotlikereadinthesun.
Mylifeiscolourful,interesting,exciting,andIwanttolearntennis,sinceIhavesawatennisgamefromRogerFederer.