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英语语法确认,100分是像写报纸那样的格式...语法不太确定呀,如果好的话还有加分哦!DucklingStormLocaldogattackedtheduckling,Littlegirlbrokenhearted.AducklingwasattackedbyalocaldogJackieanddiedverysoona

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英语语法确认,100分

是像写报纸那样的格式...

语法不太确定呀,如果好的话还有加分哦!

DucklingStorm

Localdogattackedtheduckling,Littlegirlbrokenhearted.

AducklingwasattackedbyalocaldogJackieanddiedverysoonafter.ThisduckingbelongstoalocalgirlcalledAdeline;shelovestheducklingsomuchthatshehadspendmostofhertimewiththeduckling,thereforeshenamedtheducklingPLTstandforpreciouslittletreasure.

UnfortunatelytheducklingwaskilledbydogJackie,

Butthat’snotall;Adeline’sfathercausedPLT’sdeathbecausehewantstotestdogsobedient.

Aftertheinnocentducklinghadbeenkilled,littlegirlAdelinewasbrokenhearted.ShehelpedPLTtoholdafuneralwithherthirdbrotherGregory.

Investigation：

Fromthisevent,wehavecarriedonaseriesofinvestigationson20pedestrians.

96%ofpedestrianssaythatitisfathersfault,heshouldknowwantisgoingtohappenbeforeheactit,andheshouldcaresaboutAdeline’sfelling.Andapsychologymentionedthatthiscouldformchildren’sImbalanceMoodorAutism,becausethisissuchagianthitforakidlikeAdeline’sage.

4%ofpedestrianssaythatit’salsodog’sfault,thedogshouldhaveacertaincontrolofhimself.Butazoologistmentionedthattheentireanimalcan’tresisttemptationofnewthings,andifit’sananimalthat’swakethentheyownfromtheexternal,theywilltrytoattackordemotheanimaltoshowtheirstatus.

InterviewwithGregory：

FromthiseventwealsohadaninterviewwiththirdbrotherGregory,becauseheattendedPLT’sfuneral.HementionedsympathywithAdeline,shecriedsohardduringthefuneral.Andhethinksapartformthatishimfaults,becauseheaccidentallypickedPLToutofsevenducklings.

是语法确定..不是翻译啊

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　　...原来是要看语法...翻译了半天... 　　有不少错误啊~不过为了尊重你原本的意思,我没给你改内容,只是纠正语法和逻辑错误哦　　还有,感觉那位把你的文章删的好狠...总之语法就这样差不多啦~ 　　1.Localdogattackedtheduckling,Littlegirlbrokenhearted 　　local和little前都应该加冠词a,duckling前也应加a而不是the,brokenhearted是形容词,前面应该有was. 　　2.AducklingwasattackedbyalocaldogJackieanddiedverysoonafter.ThisduckingbelongstoalocalgirlcalledAdeline 　　jackie前应该加一个named,而且这句话太罗嗦,改成定语从句吧,AducklingwhichbelongedtoalocalgirlcalledAdelinewasattackedbyalocaldognamedJackie. 　　3.shelovestheducklingsomuchthatshehadspendmostofhertimewiththeduckling 　　had去掉,这只是在叙述过去的事,不要用过去完成时.整篇文章是过去时,loves和belongs好像不对. 　　4.thereforeshenamedtheducklingPLTstandforpreciouslittletreasure. 　　stand改成standing,是非谓语动词　　5.UnfortunatelytheducklingwaskilledbydogJackie 　　dog前加THE,JACKIE去掉　　6.Butthat’snotall;Adeline’sfathercausedPLT’sdeathbecausehewantstotestdogsobedient. 　　这句话表达的不对,最好改成ThereasonforPLT'deathwasthatAdeline'sfatherjustwantedtotestthedog'sobedient. 　　7.Aftertheinnocentducklinghadbeenkilled,littlegirlAdelinewasbrokenhearted.ShehelpedPLTtoholdafuneralwithherthirdbrotherGregory. 　　innocent换成poor,littlegirl去掉,后面改成AdelinewasbrokenheartedandholdafuneralforPLTwithherthirdbrotherGregory. 　　8.Fromthisevent,wehavecarriedonaseriesofinvestigationson20pedestrians 　　have去掉. 　　9.96%ofpedestrianssaythatitisfathersfault,heshouldknowwantisgoingtohappenbeforeheactit,andheshouldcaresaboutAdeline’sfelling. 　　改成thatAdeline'fatherwaserringbecauseheshouldthinkwhatwouldhappenbeforehediditandheshouldcaredaboutAdeline'sfeeling. 　　10.becausethisissuchagianthitforakidlikeAdeline’sage 　　like改成in. 　　11.andifit’sananimalthat’swakethentheyownfromtheexternal,theywilltrytoattackordemotheanimaltoshowtheirstatus. 　　把and去掉,其实你这句话的意思我不太明白诶~逻辑有点混乱啊,告诉我你想表达什么,我再帮你改吧. 　　12.FromthiseventwealsohadaninterviewwiththirdbrotherGregory 　　thirdbrother去掉,有点罗嗦　　13.becauseheattendedPLT’sfuneral. 　　这句与前一句不构成因果啦,去掉because 　　14.HementionedsympathywithAdeline,shecriedsohardduringthefuneral. 　　这句与上一句一起改成HeattendedPLT'sfuneralandexpressedsympathytoAdelinebecauseshecriedsohardduringthefuneral. 　　15.Andhethinksapartformthatishimfaults,becauseheaccidentallypickedPLToutofsevenducklings. 　　最好改成GregorythoughtthathealsohadfaultbecauseitwashewhoaccidentallypickedPLToutofsevenducklings.用一个强调句~