以上两位的文章不是不好,只不过并不是演讲词,而只能算是两篇报导文,演讲词是有另一个格式和语气的,以下是我替你写的,你且看有甚麼分别: 　　Helloeveryone,goodmorning/afternoon/evening 　　Iameallyhonouredtohavebeengiventhisopportunitytostanduphereinfrontofyouallandbeabletosayafewwords.Asweallknowthattoday'stopicisabout"savings".Butthisword"saving"itselfhasaveryextensivemeanings,whichcouldmeanthatsomeoneissavingupforChristmasorfortheNewYear.Ormaybesavinguptobuyanewcarorsavinguptogetmarried. 　　Butthe"savings"wearetalkingabouttodayisn'ttheabove.Theonewetalkaboutismuchmorefarreaching,whichisnotjustanindividualinvolvement.Itisamovementthatmanyormostpeopleneedtoparticipate.Theresultfromthemovementoractionwillhaveagreatimpactonotherpeopleoreventotheentirepopulationandthatis:energysavings! 　　Alongwiththerapiddevelopmentofourworld,inordertosafisfyourenergyneeds,agreatdealofharmhasbeendonetoourenironmentintheprocessoflookingfornewresource.Itisnowthetimeweallshouldstopforminuteandthinkaboutthefutureofourworldforthesakeofouryoungergenerations. 　　Wemusttrynottowasteourresourceandhavetolearntosavetheenergy.Wecanactuallystartfromverysmallthings,liketurningofftheTVwhennooneiswatchingit.Turnoffthelightswhennooneisintheroom.Uselesscarandtakingtrainsandbusesinsteadtosavefuel.Sameaswaterandgas,whichweneedtousethemwiselytoo.Ifmanyofusaredoingthesamethingthenalotofenergyandresourcewillbesaved.Whenwedon'tusequiteasmuchofelectricitythentherewillbenoneedtoproducequiteasmuchtoo.Ifweproducelesselectricitythatwouldmeanwedon'tneedtousequiteasmuchfuel.Whenlessfuelisneededthenwedon'tneedtodrillforoilallovertheplace.Eventually,ourenvironmentwillnotbequiteaspollutedandwildlifewillbeprotectedaswell. 　　So,pleasethinkenvironmentalfriendly,saveenergy,saveyourresourceandmakeourworldtomorrowabetterplaceforeveryoneofustolivein! 　　Thankyouallforlistening. 　　很希望会令你满意.