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RecentlyIdidasurveyonStudents'Diet

.LinLiwhosefavoriteissweetfood,Shesaysthatitcanmakeherhappy.WangMingwhosefavoriteisthefoodwithhighfat,hethinksitisdelicious.AndZhangDan'sfavoriteisfastfood,forit'sconvenienthethinks.ZhaoHuiwhosefavoritesarevegetablesandfruit,becausehebelievesvegetablesandfruitaregoodtohishealth.IthinkonlyZhaoHui'sisgood.Becausefoodwithhighfatcancauseillnesseasily,sweetfoodisbadforourteeth,fastfoodisbadforourhealth.

Accordingtothesurveyabove,Weshouldchoosehealthyfoodinsteadofanythingthatwelike

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  改:1.forit'sconvenienthethinks-------forhebelievesitconvenient2.vegetablesandfruitaregoodto(to改为for)hishealth.3.sweetfoodisbadforourteeth,(加and)fastfoodisbad...逗号...
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