请帮忙改这篇英文作文
帮我指出其中语法或者时态之类的错误,最好能有评价
1.目前盗版的现象比较严重
2.造成这种现象的原因及危害
3.
SayNotoPiratedProducts
Nowdays,theappearanceofpiracyinoursocietyisveryserious.Piratedproductsdependontheircheapoperatingcostandeasymakingmoreandmoreappealtothelowlesspeople.Sosomeoflowlesspeopleinordertoseekthemoney,theyproducedthepiratedproducts.
Thisappearancethreatentheintellctualpropertyrightsserious.Itbreaksthelawandcopyrightsinfringement.
Inmyopinion,weshouldstoptobuythepiratedproductsfromourselves.Ifweseesomebodywhobuyingorsellingthepiratedproducts,wemusttryallmeanstostopthemandtellthemtheharmofthisthing.
Ithinkattackthepiracyisourduty.
我英文很烂……