Thisismyfather/mother/sister/brother/grandfarther
Thisismyfather,heisateacher,heloveshisstudentsverymuch~
Angthismymather,sheisanurse,sheisverykind~
Thisisaprettygirl,ok?Sheismysister,shelikedancingverymuch.
Thisismygrangpa,,hespendsallhistimewithme.
Andthisismine,Ilovemyfamily!~~~~~
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Thisismyfather,heisateacher,heloveshisstudentsverymuch.
Andthismymather,sheisanurse,sheisverykind.
Thisisaprettygirl,sheismysister,shelikesdancingverymuch.
Thisismygrangpa,heisloviely,hespendsallhistimewithme.
Andthisisme,amIcool?Ilovemyfamily!
heisalovinggrangpa
这句没有问题
Thisismysister,Sheisastudent.
Thisismyfather,Helikesplaybasketball.
Thisismymother,SheisinEnglishteacher.
Thisismybrother,Heisastudenttoo.
Andthisismyaunt,Sheisastar.
我是英语老师,帮帮你。
2楼是答案不错,但可惜有些地方错了,我帮你修改一下就可以了。
Thisismyfather,heisateacher,heloveshisstudentsverymuch.
Andthismymather,sheisanurse,sheisverykind.
Thisisaprettygirl,sheismysister,shelikesdancingverymuch.
Thisismygrangpa,heisloviely,hespendsallhistimewithme.
Andthisisme,amIcool?Ilovemyfamily!
祝你进步!