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xxxschoollocatedintheeastofchina.shewassetupin1900.XXXschoolhasbeautifulview.alotofexcellentteachersandstudents.sheissuchagoodschoolthatalmostallthestudentswanttostudyin.

it'saimistomakeusnotonlygoodatstudybutalsohaveagoodpersonality.wecanlearnalotinclassandmakefriendswhenwefree.

iwanttolearntheknowledgethatweneed,ialsowanttoknowzbouttheetiquetteandrules.ihopeteachercantellusaboutthelifewhenwestudyintheforeigncountryandthedifficultieswewillface.ialsohopetheteachercanhelpusaboutthequestionsinourstudygroup.

帮忙看一下有没有语法错误,如果有更好的表述方法,望注明.

孙红回答:
  1xxxschoollocatedintheeastofchina.   belocatedin所以改为xxxschoolislocatedintheeastofchina   2第二句要加上逗号:XXXschoolhasbeautifulviews,aswellasalotofexcellentteachersandstudents.   3whenwefree改为whenwearefree   4knowzbout改为knowabout   5helpusaboutthequestions改为helpuswiththequestions   改过后的文章如下:   xxxschoolislocatedintheeastofChina.shewassetupin1900.XXXschoolhasbeautifulviews,aswellasalotofexcellentteachersandstudents.Sheissuchagoodschoolthatalmostallthestudentswanttostudyin.   It'saimistomakeusnotonlygoodatstudybutalsohaveagoodpersonality.Wecanlearnalotinclassandmakefriendswhenwearefree.   Iwanttolearntheknowledgethatweneed,Ialsowanttoknowbouttheetiquetteandrules.Ihopeteachercantellusaboutthelifewhenwestudyintheforeigncountryandthedifficultieswewillface.Ialsohopetheteachercanhelpuswiththequestionsinourstudygroup.   以上我做了点修改,一些大小写也改了过来,总体来说文章还是不错的.有问题可以私聊.
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