…………在线修改英语作文
DearCathy,
Iheardyourfamilyarebusyandyourchildrenaregreat.That'sgood.ButIreallyworryyourchildren'shealth.Ithinkyoushouldn'tgiveyourchildrenmuchpressure.Theyshouldhavefreetimetorelax.Doyouunderstand?Everyonewillfeeltried.So,theyneedsomefreetimetodosomethingstheywanttodo.
DrAliceGreen