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Withthedevelpomentofeconomyandcultuer,people'sviewofmaritaltreatmentshavechangedalot.
From1970to2000,thenumberofmarriageshavereducedalot.in1970thenumberisabout2.5millions,butafter30yearsthenumberisdecreasingto2millions.Withthischange,thenumberofdevorcesin2000isassameasin1970.SOitiseasytoseetheproportionofdivorcehasincreased.well,thenwhatpeoplechoosetofacetheirlovelife?Byobservingthechartcarefully,Ifindthatmanypeoplenevermarriedordon’twidowedanymore.,andtheychooselivealoneorfindanewloverinstead.
People'sconceptisprogressingconstantly.Seekingbetterandfreelifeiseverybody'sright.Butithinkwhetherpeopleshouldconsideranddealwithmarriagecarefully?
我写的.饿..多多指教,应该有很多错的语法