写一篇英语作文、帮忙看下有语法错误吗.
Generallyspeaking,Ithinklammuchbetterthanbeforeinthestudy.AlthoughiliketoplaycomputersandwatchTV,ihaveyoustudymorehard.IhavenotimetoplaybecauseIwanttopassintothegoodhighschoolofourcity.
Alotofstudentshopeforthebellringeveryday.Butforme,itisadifferentanswer.EverymorningIgotoschool,Iwillbegladtoseemyclassmatesandletmetobefreshandbereadytolearn.
Thus,schoolandclassroombecomemysecondhomeinmylife,theyprovideanopportunityandaplaceformetohaveaquietenviornmenttostudy.
Thoughtheschoollifemakemetired.Istillfellhappy!
不好的地方帮我润色一下!..添加点东西也可以..
好的我肯定给予大大的加分!
明早来验收..
ihavetostudymorehard.
...能帮忙加点什么或者润色下不、感觉。不是很好嘛...