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写一篇英语作文、帮忙看下有语法错误吗.

Generallyspeaking,Ithinklammuchbetterthanbeforeinthestudy.AlthoughiliketoplaycomputersandwatchTV,ihaveyoustudymorehard.IhavenotimetoplaybecauseIwanttopassintothegoodhighschoolofourcity.

Alotofstudentshopeforthebellringeveryday.Butforme,itisadifferentanswer.EverymorningIgotoschool,Iwillbegladtoseemyclassmatesandletmetobefreshandbereadytolearn.

Thus,schoolandclassroombecomemysecondhomeinmylife,theyprovideanopportunityandaplaceformetohaveaquietenviornmenttostudy.

Thoughtheschoollifemakemetired.Istillfellhappy!

不好的地方帮我润色一下!..添加点东西也可以..

好的我肯定给予大大的加分!

明早来验收..

ihavetostudymorehard.

...能帮忙加点什么或者润色下不、感觉。不是很好嘛...

戴聚岭回答:
  inthestudy:instudy   playcomputers:playoncomputer   ihaveyoustudymorehard:ihavestudiedmuchharderthanbefore   passinto:getinto   itisadifferentanswer:it'snotthecase.   letmetobefresh:makemefeelrefreshed   bereadytolearn:bereadyforclass   schoolandclassroombecome:schoolhasbecome   theyprovideanopportunity:itoffersmeagoldenopportunity   Istillfellhappy:Istillfeelhappy.   语法错误太多了,改了一下,这样想进入重点高中,很难   补充:找我的改就不错了,初三就这个水平,再往好里改你们老师就该怀疑了,也要故意买个破绽懂吗
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