【AllSummerinaDaybyRayBrabury.Thisstoryisaboutayounggirl,livingonVenuscametotheEarth.Venusjusthasahourofsummerwhichmeanonehourofsunforeverysevenyears.Margot,themaincharacter,orderkidsdeprivedhersummer,theylock】|小学英语问答-字典翻译问答网

【AllSummerinaDaybyRayBrabury.Thisstoryisaboutayounggirl,livingonVenuscametotheEarth.Venusjusthasahourofsummerwhichmeanonehourofsunforeverysevenyears.Margot,themaincharacter,orderkidsdeprivedhersummer,theylock】

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AllSummerinaDaybyRayBrabury.Thisstoryisaboutayounggirl,livingonVenuscametotheEarth.Venusjusthasahourofsummerwhichmeanonehourofsunforeverysevenyears.Margot,themaincharacter,orderkidsdeprivedhersummer,theylockherinacloset,becauseMargotwasdifferenttoorderkids.

Thestorymakewereader,acannotjoinandfelling'sworld,asadstory.Forwholesummer,ofadayMargotislockinacloset,andcannotseethesunofshe'sbeenlongforsiceherfirstcametoliveonVenus.Thekidsinherclasstraphergoincloset,becausetherthinkMargotactsasifshewasbettertheneverybody,shecametoVenusaftertheorderkids,sherembersthersun,orderkidsjustseethesunduringtheyabouttwoyearsold,andneverseenthesunagain.ThiswhyIfeelstupid.

Afterahour,sunwasdisappearswhichmeanthesummerofVenus'ssummerisend,theygobackinsidethecloset,theyallremembersher.InAllSummerinaDaythethemeissad.TheAllSummerinadayisshortstory,itdidn'thavemanythingcanwelearn,justcanuseteachoursreadingandlanguagearts.

Inthisstory,youcansit,don'tthinkanything.Insummer,Margotbeinglockthecloset,buttheywaslookthesunplayhide-andseak,runaroundofplayground,theyarehappy,butMargot'sheartiscrying.

Daybyday,yearbyyear,Magortneedwaitordersevenyearandtwo2,556day,alongtimetoseethesunandsummer.Thestoryisshortjustabout550words,butisagoodstory,differentASummerTrageday,twoshortstoryallaboutthesummer,butoneisshowdifferencse,oneistragdayofsummer.

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　　语法出错很多以下是更改后的文章：　　AllsummerinaDaybyRayBradbury.Thisstoryisaboutayounggirl,livingonVenuscametotheEarth.Venusjusthasahourofsummerwhichmeanonehourofsunforeverysevenyears.Margot,themaincharacter,orderkidsdeprivedhersummer;theylockherinacloset,becauseMargotwasdifferenttoorderkids. 　　Thestorymakewereader,acannotjoinandfeeling’sworld,asadstory.Forwholesummer,ofadayMargotislockinacloset,andcannotseethesunofshe'sbeenlongforsinceherfirstcametoliveonVenus.Thekidsinherclasstraphergoincloset,becausetheythinkMargotactsasifshewasbettertheneverybody,shecametoVenusaftertheorderkids,sheremembersthesun,orderkidsjustseethesunduringtheyabouttwoyearsold,andneverseenthesunagain.ThiswhyIfeelstupid. 　　Afteranhour,sunwasdisappearswhichmeanthesummerofVenus'ssummerisend,theygobackinsidethecloset,theyallremembersher.InAllSummerinaDaythethemeissad.TheAllSummerinadayisshortstory,itdidn'thavemanythingcanwelearn,justcanuseteachoursreadingandlanguagearts. 　　Inthisstory,youcansit,don'tthinkanything.Insummer,Margotbeinglockthecloset,buttheywaslookthesunplayhide-andseek,runaroundofplayground,theyarehappy,butMargot'sheartiscrying. 　　Daybyday,yearbyyear,Magortneedwaitordersevenyearandtwo2,556day,alongtimetoseethesunandsummer.Thestoryisshortjustabout550words,butisagoodstory,differentASummerTragedy,twoshortstoriesallaboutthesummer,butoneisshowdifferences,oneistragedyofsummer.