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Hallo,mynameisDavid,I’ma16-year-oldboy,IwasborninSeptemberthethirtieth,nineteenninety.IalwaysspeakChineseatschoolandathome,butIhavesecondlanguage,thisisEnglish.Atschool,Ihavemanysubjects,likemath,science,Chinese,art,PEandsoon.There’skindergarten,primary,junior,highschoolanduniversityinchina.Timeflies,I’vefinishmyjunioreducation.IenjoyedplayingPCgamesandlisteningtomusicbefore,butnow,Iliketowalkaloneinthepark.

I’vebeentomanyplacesinchina.forexample,HK,Peking,Hangzhou,Nanjingandsoon.HKisabusycity,everyonehereeveryminutedoingtheirworks,theyevenhaven’tfreetimebutinHangzhou,there’snotoomuchworktodo,everyonefeelsrelaxed,andthisisabeautifulcity,Iwanttogotothebeautywestlakeagain.thesecondlargestcityisPeking,there,youcanvisitthePalaceMuseumortheGreatWall,that’swonderful

Now,letmetellyouaboutmyfamily.inmyfamilytherearethreepeople,myfather,mymotherandI.myfatherisateacherandmymotherisabusinesswoman.myfatheralwayscooksdinerforuseverydayandaftermealmymotherwashesthetableware.whereamIofcourse,I’mdoingmyhomework.:]

Thisholiday,I’llstayhomeandlearnhowtoplaytennis---myfatherwillteachme.

Sometime,Ithinkaboutmyfuture.Idreamtobeabusinessman,becauseifIsuccessful,I’llhavemanymoremoney.It’sonlymydream,butIhaven’tknownwhatIwouldtobe.:]

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　　Hallo,mynameisDavid,I’ma16-year-oldboy,borninSeptemberthethirtieth,nineteenninety.IalwaysspeakChineseatschoolandathome,butIcanspeakasecondlanguage,thatisEnglish.Atschool,Ihavemanysubjects,likemaths,science,Chinese,art,PEandsoon.Therearekindergartens,primary,junior,highschoolsanduniversitiesinchina.Timeflies,andI’vefinishedmyjunioreducation.IlikeplayingPCgamesandlisteningtomusicinthepast,butnow,Iliketowalkaloneinthepark. 　　I’vebeentomanyplacesinchina.forexample,HK,Peking,Hangzhou,Nanjingandsoon.HKisabusycity,everyonehereeveryminutedoestheirwork,andtheyevenhaven’tanyfreetime!ButinHangzhou,thereseemsnottoomuchworktodo,everyonefeelsrelaxed,andthisisabeautifulcity,Iwanttogotothebeautywestlakeagain.thesecondlargestcityisPeking,youcanvisitthePalaceMuseumortheGreatWallthere,that’swonderful! 　　Now,letmetellyouaboutmyfamily.inmyfamilytherearethreepeople,myfather,mymotherandI.myfatherisateacherandmymotherisabusinesswoman.myfatheralwayscooksdinerforuseverydayandaftermealmymotherwashesthetableware.Asformeofcourse,I’mdoingmyhomework.:] 　　inthisholiday,I’llstayathomeandlearnhowtoplaytennis---myfatherwillteachme. 　　Sometime,Ithinkaboutmyfuture.Idreamofbeingabusinessman,becauseifIamsuccessful,I’llhavemuchmoremoney.It’sonlymydreamandIstilldon'tknowwhatIwouldbe.:]