帮我改英文作文,语法错误请说出为什么谢谢.
Inrecentyears,moreandmorepeopletrytheirbesttotakecareoftheirfamilies.Manypeoplethinkiftheyliveinthecountryside,theywilltakecareoftheirfamiliesbetter.Butinmyopinion,Peopleliveinurbanareascantakebettercareoftheirfamiliesthanpeopleliveinruralareas.
Firstofall,peoplewholiveincityhaveconvenientlivingenvironment.
Asyouknow,weallneedheath.Alotofpeoplediedfrombadtraffic.Becausetheylivedincountrysidetheydidn'thaveenoughtimetosavedthemselves.Asyouknowtimepayavitalroleinourlife.Intheurbanareaswehavesoconvenienttrafficthatwecansavemoretimetosavemanypeople.Bytheway,incityswehaveadvancingmedicineinstrumentsandlotsofamusementparks.Itmakesourlifeheathandcolorful.
Forinstance,MyfriendnamedAnnwholiveincity.threemothsagoherfatherheartattack,shecalledhospitalandtwominuteslatertheambulancewenttotheirhomeandherfatherbesaved.Thedoctorsaidifherfatherhaveseveralminuteslater,hewoulddie.Sopeopleliveinurbanareascanbettertakecareoftheirfamiliesthanpeoplewholiveincountryside.
FinallyIthinkthebetterchoiceofwhichareastoliveinurbanregions,whichisbeneficaltoallourfamilymembers.
帮我看下有多少单词.谢谢