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It'sveryfine,today.sotherewasaoutdooractivity.Firstly,wewenttotheparkbyschoolbusat7:20p.m.Andat9:30,wearrivedatthedestination.Secondly.wewereswimming,it'ssonice.Becauseswimmingismyfavoritesport.Afterlunch,hadagoodrestandwetoldstoriesbyEnglish.Finally,inpark,wetookphotoseachother.About5:30,westilltookschoolbustogohome.Whatagoodday!很久没弄了,将就点
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