英语厉害的进来!这篇文章哪些地方有错,Beijingisabigcity.It'sthecapitalofChinaandit'sanancientcapital.BeijingistheoldestcityinChina.It'sabout3thousandyearsold.It'sintheeastofChina.ThepopoulationofBeijing
1人问答
问题描述：
英语厉害的进来!
这篇文章哪些地方有错,
Beijingisabigcity.It'sthecapitalofChinaandit'sanancientcapital.
BeijingistheoldestcityinChina.It'sabout3thousandyearsold.It'sintheeastofChina.ThepopoulationofBeijingisabout17million.It'stheseconedbiggestcitiesinChina.Beijingisagoodplacetovisit.It'sfamousfortheGreatWallandtheForbiddenCity.NowBeijingisbecomingamodernandimternationalcity.
Thisyearis2008.The29thOlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijinginAugust.AndtheweatherinbeijingwillbehotinAugust.
结尾用什么好呢?
戈金明回答：
Beijingisabigcity.It'sthecapitalofChinaandit'sancapitalcitywithalonghistory.
(ancient表示"远古的,古代的",而北京现在依然是首都,所以在这里应该用"历史悠久的")
BeijingisoneoftheoldestcitiesinChina.
(北京并不是唯一的历史最悠久的城市,只是其中之一,这样才符合历史事实.)
Beijinghasabout3000-yearhistory.
(这样才是地道的英语表达)
It'sinthenorthpartofChina.
(北京是在北方,不是东方)
ThepopoulationofBeijingisabout17million.It'sthesecondlargestpopulationinChina.
(前文说北京是最大城市之一,这里说是第二大,逻辑不好,改成就人口来说,是第二大比较好.)
Beijingisagoodplacetovisit.It'sfamousfortheGreatWallandtheForbiddenCity.Beijingisbothamodernandaninternationalcity.
(北京早已经是现代和国际城市,不是"isbecoming".)
Nowitisyearof2008.The29thOlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijinginAugust.AlthoughtheweatherinAugustwillbealittlehot,it'sattractiveanyway.
(Thisyearis2008.典型的中式英语.已修改.八月的天气虽然比较热,但是还要提出其长处,不能只说热就完了.修改后的句子意思是"八月的天气有点热,尽管如此,北京还是一样迷人")
八字精批
八字合婚
八字起名
八字财运
2024运势
测终身运
姓名详批
结婚吉日
英语推荐
英语推荐
最新更新
精品分类
优秀英语推荐
热门英语
邮箱： 
