求改英语作文,看看哪些地方错误,改进的
Itisuniversallyacknowledgethateconomyistraditionalvirtue,thetruthofitisself-evident,whilemostofpeoplehaveformdunrealisticpictureofeconomy,theydisregardtheimportanceofitwithoutbeingconsciousthatthayaredoinganythingimmoral.
Nowadays,economyisplayinganunprecedentalpartinourdailylifeandexertinggreatinfluenceonournextgeneration,thoughoureconomiclevel,tosomeextent,havebeenimprovedgreatly,yetourachievementisatthecostofoverdueofconsumptionofmaterialresources,besides,anincreasingmassofpeoplecometorealizetheinfluenceofeconomysincetherearelimitedrescousescanbeexploited.whichhasbecomeasortofthreattothesurvivalofourhuman.
Consideringalltheabove-mentioned,inmyconception,ltislong-timetraditioninchinneseculturethatweshouldattachgreatimportancetoeconomy,andneverhaveweenjoyedsomuchprosperitywithsolittleworries,anditishightimewedidsomethinghelpfulandconstructiveforournextgeneration.