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请英语高手帮帮忙……原文是这样的,Shortafterthenewschoolyearbegan,anexcitingpartyheldinourschool.thepartywassointerstingandinstructivethatalltheteachersandstudentsenjoyedverymuch.Atthepartysomestudentspe
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请英语高手帮帮忙……

原文是这样的,Shortafterthenewschoolyearbegan,anexcitingpartyheldinourschool.thepartywassointerstingandinstructivethatalltheteachersandstudentsenjoyedverymuch.Atthepartysomestudentsperformmanyrichandcolourfulprogrammer,suchassongs,dances,playsandsoon.Theysanginhighlypraiseofoursociallistmotherland.Everbodywhowaspresentwasstruckbywonderfurprogrammes.Thepartywaslastednearlythreehours,andwhenatlastcometoanend,theaudiencestoodup,cheeredandclappingforalongtime.Whatasuccessfulpartywehadhadthatday!一共有九个需要改的…不包括大小写和笔误…请大家帮帮忙……

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  1.Shortlyafterthenewschoolyearbegan,anexcitingparty2.washeldinourschool.Thepartywassointerestingandinstructivethatalltheteachersandstudentsenjoyed4.itverymuch.Atthepartysomestudents5.performedmanyrichandcolourfulprogrammes,suchassongs,dances,playsandsoon.Theysangin6.highpraiseofoursociallistmotherland.Everbodywhowaspresentwasstruckbywonderfulprogrammes.Theparty7.(去掉was)lastednearlythreehours,andwhen8.itatlastcametoanend,theaudiencestoodup,cheeredand9.clappedforalongtime.Whatasuccessfulpartywe10..(去掉had)hadthatday!   里面有些拼写错误,你好好看看,我尽力了.修改处用数字标出了,你仔细看看吧.
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