看看以下几个段落有没有语法错误或者用语不当?
mydream
iknowawonderfulthing,justlikethetwinklestar,likeagloryrose,likethegrandsunshine.Itshowsusthewaytosuccess,theturningoflife,andthechancetodemonstrateourselves.Yes,starrystage!thatismydream.
stage,doesn'tmeanshowingoff.itisapuredream.
iamaballerina,butnotthetopintheteam.soeverychancetobeonthestageispreciousforme.Iaminluxurydress,thehighlightisfocusonme.musicfloateverywhere.theairisfilledwithmelodies.iimaginemyselfaswan,swimminginthemelodies.thefeelingisimpressive.iknow:iamtheprincess,iamreadytoownthestage,thecameraispointingtome,everyoneisreadytoclapforme.nomatterhowlaboriousthetimeunderstagewas,iamconfidentlybeingonthestage,hereismykingdom,mychancetoshowmyself,tosurprisepeoplewithmytalent!
nowi'monthestage"showingoff"myself.idreamoffightmyselfastage,idreamofbemyselfonthestage.idreamofshowmyselfonthestageoflife.
ihaveadreamthatondayicanbeonthestarrystage.ihaveadreamthatondayicanshowingmyselfonthestarrystage.ihaveadreamthatondayicandemonstrateawonderfulmeonthestage!
thankyou.