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剑5,test1writingtask1
Thelinegraphshowsthathowmanypeoplewhoareattheir65inJapan,SwedenandUSAfrom1940to2040.Itisclearthatinthreecountries,thesizeoftheelderaged65willreachhispeakin2040.
Accordingtothetable,theproportionofpeoplewhoare65year-oldhasaslightlydecreaseinUSAsince1940to1960,whileothertwocountriesbothhaveagentleincrease.ThenumberoftheoldhasnochangeinAmericabetween1960and1980,onthecontrary,inJapananinSweden,therehappenedaslowlyriseineachcountry.TheAmericanelderarecountinuallybecomemoreandmoresince21centuryandtheywillbethemostin2040among3countries.
However,theproportionofthepopulationaged65inSwedenfinallysurpassthatofJapanfromapproximately1998untilnowandwillbecontinuedto2040byfluctuatinginhisownpattern.ThesizeofthepopulationinJapanleveledoffandissmallerthanthatofSweden,butitwillstillclimbinthefuture.
Overall,thenumberoftheAmericanagedistheleastoneatthebeginningof1940andwillbethemostonein2040.