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Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Lettingafriendmakeamistakeisbetterthansayingordoingsomethingthatmaydestroyyourfriendship.

Makingsomemistakesareevitablelyineverybody'sdailylife.Weusuallymeetaproblemthatwhatweshoulddoifourfriendsmakesomemistakes,sayingordoingsomethingorlettinghemakethemistake?Inmyopinion,Iprefertosayingordoingsomethingtohelphimthanlethimkeepgoingonit,eventhoughitmaydestroyourfriendship.

Firstandforemost,tobeafriend,honestyisthemostimprotantcharacterinousfriendship.IthoughtIshouldtakemyresponsibilitytoremindmyfriendwhenhemakeamistakeifIwanttohaveadeepandlastingfriendship.Realfriendshipwouldnotbedestroyedbysincereadvise.Forinstance,IhaveafriendnamedAlexinhighschool.WhenIseehemakingsomemistakes,suchasawrongpositioninplayingbasketball,havingabeeinhisheadinclass,Iwillpointitoutdirectlyandoutspokenly,sodoeshe.Thisneverdestoryourfriendship,becauseweallknowoursuggestionsissincere.

Besides,itisbeneficialforousfriendstoknowtheirmistakeandthencorrectit,thatisthereasonwhytheycanimprovethemselves.Aproverbsays,"Ahistoryofyesterdayisthebestmirrorofthetomorrow."Iftheydon'tknowtheirmistake,howcantheycorrectitandcomplementtheirselves.Inretrospectofmylife,IhaveafriendnamedMahikowhoismyneighbor,hespendmostofhistimeoncomputergamesandigorehisstudy.Iknowitisharmfultohis.Hence,Iaskedhimtoleavethegameandcomebacktohisreallifebutherejected.Intheend,healmostisolatedtorealworldandaddictedinthecomputergames,andthisdevastatehisfamilyandhisfuture.IalwaysthinkthatifIhadinsistedonhelpinghim,maybetheendwouldchange.

Consequently,ifIhavearealfriendshipwithsomeone,Iwon’tignorehismistakeandIwillpointitout.Ithinkthatistherealmeanoffriendship.Foraboverensons,Idon’tagreethisstatement.