两篇英语稿,求帮忙修改啊、、在线等
参加比赛用的,找不到老师了、、
字数超了,只贴一篇,另一篇重新提问
MyPersonalStatement
Hello,everyone,I'mFiona,asilentgirlwhowascomesfromabeautifultown,issixteenyearsold.Ilovecomputerverymuch,andtobeagreathackerismydream.Hackerisagroupofpeoplewhowerewellversedincomputer,andtheyaregoodatmathandEnglish,themostimportantistheyobeytheHackerSpirit,it’stheonlydifferencebetweenhackerandcracker.
Iknowtobeagreathackerisdifficult,soIwillworkhardforit.ThefirststepIwilldoisstudyhard,especiallyinmathandEnglish;thenIwilllearntheknowledgeaboutcomputertechnologyfrommyfathertoimprovemyselfinmysparetime.That’sme,agirlwhohasadream,what’saboutyours?
这个需要再加一两句话,我词穷了….不知道怎么加