【英语改错。。。高中的。。。onedayihappentofindachattingroominmyqq.therepeoplewerechattinginenglish.itriedtochatwithsomeofthem.tomysurprised,ifoundtheoralenglishofsomejuniorstudentswrebetterthanmine.i】
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英语改错。。。高中的。。。
onedayihappentofindachattingroominmyqq.therepeoplewerechattinginenglish.itriedtochatwithsomeofthem.tomysurprised,ifoundtheoralenglishofsomejuniorstudentswrebetterthanmine.iaskedhimforadviceandtheytoldmetopracticemoreonqq.buteverydayafterthatiwouldspendonehourmuoralenglishonqq.daybydayllearnedformmanyusefulwordsandexpressions.astimegoingby,ifoundthaticouldevencommunicatesomecollegestudentsfreely.
有十处错误。
帮下忙啦。
谢谢。
葛思擘回答：
加*号处是改动的地方（给的分数有点低哦，^_^，希望可以帮到你）
onedayihappened*tofindachattingroominmyqq.where*peoplewerechattinginenglish.itriedtochatwithsomeofthem.tomysurprise*,ifoundtheoralenglishofsomejuniorstudentswrebetterthanme*.iaskedthem*foradviceandtheytoldmetopracticemoreonqq.so*everydayafterthatiwouldspendonehourmuoralenglishonqq.daybydayllearnedform*(去掉from)manyusefulwordsandexpressions.astimes*go*by,ifoundthaticouldevencommunicatewith*somecollegestudentsfreely.
侯春萍回答：
onedayihappened(1.加ed)tofindachattingroominmyqq.where(2.改成where或在there前加,in)peoplewerechattinginenglish.itriedchatting(3.tryto尽全力做，trydoing尝试）withsomeofthem.tomysurprise（4.去d),ifoundtheoralenglishofsomejuniorstudentswrebetterthanme(5.改为me).iaskedthem(6.改为them)foradviceandtheytoldmetopracticemorein(7.介词inqq)qq.buteverydayafterthatiwouldspendonehourpracticing(8.原来那个词不对)oralenglishonqq.daybydayllearned（9.去form）manyusefulwordsandexpressions.astimegoes（10.一般是这样的）by,ifoundthaticouldevencommunicatewith(11.加witn)somecollegestudentsfreely.
找到11处，不过7.可能不是的
杜彦芬回答：
onedayihappentofindachattingroominmyqq.happen->happened
therepeoplewerechattinginenglish.itriedto
chatwithsomeofthem.tomysurprised,ifoundsurprised—>surprise
theoralenglishofsomejuniorstudentswrejunior->senior
betterthanmine.iaskedhimforadviceandhim->them
theytoldmetopracticemoreonqq.buteverybut->so
dayafterthatiwouldspendonehourmuoralhour后加on
englishonqq.daybydayllearnedformmanyonqq->inqq去掉from
usefulwordsandexpressions.astimegoinggoing->goes
by,ifoundthaticouldevencommunicatecommunicate后加with
somecollegestudentsfreely.
苏胜石回答：
onedayi(happen改为happened)tofindachattingroominmyqq.(there这里是three吗，there口语表达也没错，一楼的where改也没错，是定语从句的表达,修饰room)peoplewerechattinginenglish.itried（去掉to）（chat改为chatting）withsomeofthem.tomy(surprised改为surprise，surprise是名词),ifoundtheoralenglishofsomejuniorstudentswrebetterthanmine(这里没错).iasked（him改为them）foradviceandtheytoldmetopracticemoreonqq.(but改为so)everydayafterthatiwouldspendone(hourmu改为hour)(+praticing或+on)oralenglish(on改为in)qq.daybydayllearned(去掉form)manyusefulwordsandexpressions.astime（going改为went）by,ifoundthaticouldevencommunicate(+with)somecollegestudentsfreely.
总结：
1.there处，应该是你打错了（所以不算错误）
2.tried处，trytodo是努力做，企图做
trydoing是尝试做，试着做
（这里一共两处错误）
3.surprise处，tomysurprise是固定表达，意思：令我惊讶的是，让我吃惊的是
4.him改为them因为这里指的是他们，宾语要和后面的句子一致．后面说的是they
5.but处，改为so,联系句子意思，知道是因果关系，而不是转则关系
6.hourmu改为hour是你打错了（不算错误）
7.＋praticing或＋on处，spendtimeonsth或spendtimedoingsth是固定表达
8.learned处，learn+sth学习某物
9.gonging处，astimegoesby和astimewentby是固定表达，因为是过去式，所以用后者．
10．＋with处，communicatewith是和XX人交流的意思．固定表达．
以上10点，1和6是你打错了，不算．2处共有两处错误．
所以一共刚好10处错误
刘秉毅回答：
happeningthireschatingsurprisesstudents'sadviced(to)去掉
learnedtogoesevencould
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