Myfavoueitefestivalisspringfestival.
ThisyearIhaveahappyspringfeativalwith(改为to)myfamily.
OnNewYear'sEve,allthefamilypeoplegettogethertohaveabigdinnerintheresturant.During(改为at)thedinnerwehaveasmalltalkandplaysomegames.Wesaysomegoodhopetoeachother.Forexample,keepgoodhealthe,tryyourbesttodoeverything,haveagoodmoodinthisyear,happyeverydayandsoon.
Thankstothisspringfestival,itmakeourfamilypeoplegettoghther.Weenjoyourselvesandinthenewyearweallfighting.
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MySpringFestivalisspecial(我的春节很特殊).MyuncleandmyauntcamebackfromShanghai(我的叔叔阿姨都从上海回来了).MyfamilywereveryhappytokeeptheSpringFestivalwiththem(全家人都非常高兴和他们共度春节).Anditwasthemostexcitingfestivalofallthefestivals(它也是所有节日中最令人激动的).
OnNewYear’sEve,myfatherandmyuncletalkedabouttheirworktogether(在除夕夜,我的爸爸和我的叔叔一起谈论他们的工作).Mymumdidsomecookingwithmyaunt(我的妈妈和阿姨做饭).GrandparentsandIwatchedtheNewYearTVprogrammes(我和我的祖父母观看春节电视节目).Ataboutsixo’clock,wehadaspecialfamilydinner(在大约六点钟我们享用了一顿特殊的家庭晚餐).