(1)这篇比较短小,词汇量也不大
Hello!I'mAmy.Ihaveagoodfriend.HernameisZhangYun.HerEnglishnameisBetty.SheisaChinesegirl.Sheistenyearsold.SheisintheNo.5Primaryschool.SheisinClass7,Grade2.SheisgoodatEnglish.ShelikesChinese,too.Sheiskindandveryfriendly.Shelikeshelpingothers.Shelikessingingandplayingbasketball.Thisismygoodfriend.Doyouwanttoknowmore?
(2)这篇语句不错,有点长但是可以删减的很好
Ihaveafriend.HernameisCandy.Sheistwelveyearold.Shehasblackandshorthair.Shehasalittlemouth,twobigeyes.Sheissocute.Hermomanddadloveher.Shehasahappyfamily.Herfriendslikehertoo,Soshe’shappyeveryday.
SheisastudentofYiZongFuXiao.SheisinClassFourGradeSix.Shestudiesveryhard.Englishisherfavouritesubject.ShelikestospeakEnglish.ShecanspeakEnglishverywellnow.Shealwayssays“Learnbydoing.”SoshethinksspeakingisveryimportantinlearningEnglish.
Weareverybusystudyingwhenweareinschool.Butontheweekend,wearefree.WeoftendohomeworktogetheronSaturdays.Afterthat,wecanwatchTVathome.Sometimes,weplaygames.Wehavethesamehobbies.ShelikesridingbikesandwatchingTVandsodoI.Herfavouritesportisswimming.She’sverygoodatit.Sheoftenteachesmehowtoswiminsummer.
Ilikeherverymuch.Iamluckytobeherfriend.
(3)这篇适中
Ihaveagoodfriend.HernameisWuMi.Sheisthirteenyearsold,Butsheisshort.Shehasbigeyes,asmallmouth,asmallnoseandaroundface.Itisverycute.Shelikesreadingbooksanddomanually.Herskillfulhands,canmakeapleasantsurprise.Ilikeherverymuch,becausewearegoodfriends.
总之,三篇里的句子拼拼接接也许会成就一篇精华的,加油!
ps,我也是找的,采取不采取在你.