托福TPO1的综合作文,求批改
1细节2point出来了没3格式上可以吗?
Inthelecture,theprofessorcastsdoubtonthepointofthereadingpassagethatfour-dayworkweekhasabeneficialeffectonthecountry,companiesandindividuals.Theprofessorclaimsthatthenewpolicyhavenoeffectatall.
First,thereadingpassageshowsthatthenewpolicywillincreaseprofitsandefficiencythroughreductionoferrorsandsoon,whereastheprofessorholdsthatthenewpolicywillforcethecompaniestospendmore.Tomakenewemployeessuitableforthecompany,thecompanywillprovidetraining,medicalbenefits,officespaceandmorecomputerwhichwillcostsomuchmoney.
Second,theprofessorhaveadifferentviewonthereadingpassagethatfollowingthenewpolicy,therearemorejobstoprovidewhichwilldecreasetheunemploymentrates.Theprofessorarguesthatthecompaniesmightasktheiremployeestoworkovertimeordothesameamountofworkinthefour-dayworktime.Inthisstate,noextrajobscouldbeprovided.
Third,thereadingpassageindicatesthatlessworktimeandmoreleisuretimewillimprovethequalityofemployees’life.Onthecontrary,theprofessorsuggeststhatlessworktimewillmakethemhavelesschancetopromoteandcouldbethefirstonetobedismissedintheeconomycrisis.Virtually,lessworktimecannotimprovequalityoftheirlife.