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Asthedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,someaspectsoftraditionalculturearebeinglost,sosomepeoplethinkthatthetraditionalcultureandtechnologywillbethemodernscienceandtechnologysuchascomputerorinternet,whatisyou
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Asthedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,someaspectsoftraditionalculturearebeinglost,sosomepeoplethinkthatthetraditionalcultureandtechnologywillbethemodernscienceandtechnologysuchascomputerorinternet,whatisyouropinion?

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Sincemodernscienceandtechnologywelledupthesedays,awidevarietyoftraditionalculturearebeinglost.Alotofpeoplesaythatthetraditionalcultureandtechnologyhasatendencyofbeingsupercededbythemodernscienceandtechnologysuchascomputerorinternet.Personally,Iagreewiththatpointofview,forthefollowingreasons.

Modernscienceandtechnologyhasalotofadvantagesratherthanthetraditionalculture.Firstly,modernscienceandtechnologysavestime.Moreandmorepeopleareusingtelephonesorcomputerscanappropriatelyjustifythatargument.Forexample,peopleprefertousetelephoneoremailtokeepintouchwithothers.Wecan’timaginthatifonlyletterscouldbeusedtoconnectwithafriendfaraway,wewouldwaitagestoreceiveareply!Secondly,modernscienceandtechnologycanmakethingsdonemoreeasily.Traditionalcultureandtechnologyusuallyhascomplexprocedures.Soscientiststriestofindnewwaysorinventsomethingtomakethingseasytobedone,suchasthewashingmachingwhichhelppeopletowashclothes.Thereareabout90%ofpeopleusewashingmachineforitismorecovenientthanoldwaysofwashingclothesbyhand.Lastbutnottheleast,usingmodernscienceandtechnologyinsomewayscostslessmoney.Onecouldsurftheinternettogetinformationwhichisfree,whileonehavetocostsomemoneytobuybookstoread.

However,modernscienceandtechnologyhassomelimitations.Assomeofthesetechnologiesareonlybeenusedseveralyears,theyareusuallynotsophisticatedenough.Inthesecases,oldwaysaremoreuseful,formostofthemhaveevenstandthousandyearsoftesting.

Asisdiscussed,althoughmodernscienceandtechnologyhassomelimitations,itbringsustoomanybenefits,foritistimesaving,easytouseanditcostslessmoney.Inconclude,itisreasonabletobelievethatthetraditionalcultureandtechnologywillbereplacedbythemodernscienceandtechnologyinthefuture.

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  感觉princess_todd的英语很不怎么样啊,benefit明显是可以作为名词用的,而且用得很多~itbringsustoomanybenefits是很地道的,在GOOGLE中搜索,绝对可以在英国人的网站上看到类似结构...晕...   我认为LZ的文章可以上6   雅思作文评分标准分四大项:任务完成,结构层次,词汇语言,语法运用.然后各项加起来算平均分.   LZ的词汇语言部分,高分词汇不多,特别复杂的句子也不多,但是看着感觉不别扭,一句是一句,感觉不像很多人为了写长句而写长句,或者是用套句,这种反而让考官看着觉得很不舒服,我估计LZ这部分至少可以达到5.5分;语法也有几出错误,不多,我自己看了一下,有一处单复数有明显错误(traditionalcultureandtechnology好象应该算复数),但总体来说没有其他的明显错误,至少可以达到5.5分;LZ的结构层次部分是可以得高分的,简单明了,很清晰,开头点出中心--第二段着重写优点--第三段客观写缺点(但不过分)--简单总结,对于论点也能找到例子证明,很好,个人认为这部分有7分;对于任务完成部分,个人感觉至少有6.5.这样总的算下来LZ有6分.
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