Saturday,March5th SunnyItwasfinetoday.MyclassmatesandImetattheschoolgateat7:30.Wearedividedintothreegroups.Somehelpedcleanupthepark.SomewenttotheoldPeople’shometovisittheoldpeople.Theyplayedchesswiththemandperformedaplayforthem.Iwenttovisitthesickchildreninthehospitalwithfourofmyclassmates.Wesangsongsforthemandtoldthemsomestoriestocheerthemup.IfeltveryhappybecauseIcouldhelpothers.
这是一篇日记,时态应该是过去时,要点包括:你和同学们7:30在学校门口集中,然后分头去清洁公园、养老院看望老人、医院看望生病的小孩。有提示词,要充分利用,要用好简单句,适当用复杂句。Somehelpedcleanupthepark.这是helpdo词组,IfeltveryhappybecauseIcouldhelpothers.这是because引导的原因状语从句。