SAT作文评分问题!我真的很迷茫!

我一直自我感觉英语不错,可准备了一段时间SAT作文后,今天把第一篇作文发到国外的一个网站上,大家只给我2/12,有呢么差么?我整整写了2面纸啊,而且开头结尾也有扣题,没怎么跑题啊~可2分到底是什么层次?不是说只要写满1面办就有8分吗?我快急死了,还有一个月就考试呢,自己目标还呢么高TAT

下面是我在作文,希望有经验的人帮帮我!Ireallyneedhelp!跪谢!

topic：Doesastrongcommitmenttotechnologyprogresscauseasocietytoneglectothervalues,suchaseducationandtheprotectionoftheenvironment?

Myessay:

Intoday’sworld,themoreandmoredevelopedtechnologysurlygivesuslotsofachievementsandotherbenefits,butthereareothercommensuratelyurgentproblemssuchasenvironmentpollutionandtheoveruseoftechnology.Asindividualsinthissociety,wemusttakeonourresponsibilitiestosolvethesematters.

InthemovieAnInconvenientTruthdirectedbyDavidGuggenheimisagreatfilmtoeducatepeopletoprotecttheenvironment.Themovieindicatesthatifwedon’ttakemeasurestoprotecttheenvironment,theglobal-warmingproblemwillbecomeworseandworse,andourplanetwillbecomeafrying-pan.‘peopledevastatetheenvironmentrecklessly,’Davidsays,’hereasonwhyIwantedtomakethisfilmistoletmorecitizensknowtheessenceofthisproblemandosomethingusefultorescueourendangeredearth,suchasdonotdrivethecarswhichneedgasoline,instead,buytheelectriccars.Inthemovie,Ishowedpeoplethesituationofourtoday’splanet.Thepolarbearsarebeingkilled,theice-caparemelting,andthetemperatureisgettinghigherandhigher.Isuggestthatwithinonehundredyears,someplacesthathavelowaltitudeswillforeversubmergeintheocean.Hopemorepeoplewillrealizethissortofproblems.’

JustlikeDavidsaid,therearemanybenefitsofthedevelopmentoftechnology,butwecan’tavoidtheseriousemergencieslyingaheadofus.Theyarepotentialdangerstousevenourdescendants.

Hereisanotherexamplewhichallofusshouldthinkdeeplyforit,.RecentlyagroupofteenagersattendedtheMUNandmadeawonderfulspeechforallthepeoplearoundtheearth.Athirteenyear-oldgirlsaideagerly,’Comingheretoday,Ihavenohiddenagenda.Iamfightingformyfuture.Iamheretospeakforthecountlessanimalsdyingacrossthisplanetbecausetheyhavenowheretogo.Wecannotaffordtobenotheard.Iamafraidto