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May12thisanunforgettabledayforalltheChinesepeople.TherewasaseriousearthquakeonthatdayinSichuanProvince.Thebuildingsfelldownsuddenlyandthousandsofpeopledied.IwasverysadwhenIheardofthenews.
AlltheChinesepeoplegettogethertoovercomethedifficulties.Mostpeopledonatedmoneytothem.,sodidI.Thesoldiersandthedoctorstriedtheirbesttosavemorepeopleandtheynevergiveup!
IhopetheSichuanpeolecanrebuidtheirhometownearly.Ibelievetomorrowwillbebetter!