请教高手,下面作文中有没有语法错误或者不当搭配,或者意思不明确的?万分感谢.
Thebillionsofmoneywhichhasbeenspentonthespaceresearchcanalwaysattractenoughpublicattention,foritfailstochangetheworldimmediately.Somepeoplesupposethatthequalityoflivewouldhaveimprovedextremelywithuningthemreasonably.Asfarasiamconcerned,icanhardlyfollowthisopinion.
自己发现了一点,就是后面提到money的时候用了代词them,是不是应该用it?