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【麻烦,请帮我修改一下我的小作文,China’sNationalDaycelenrations2009Oct1st2009isaworthyofremember,thedayisnumberthe60thNationalDaycelebrationsofChina.Atearlyofthisyear,manyofpeoplebeganparperingforit.Forexa】
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麻烦,请帮我修改一下我的小作文,

China’sNationalDaycelenrations2009

Oct1st2009isaworthyofremember,thedayisnumberthe60thNationalDaycelebrationsofChina.

Atearlyofthisyear,manyofpeoplebeganparperingforit.Forexample,myyoungersisteristakingparteintheinspectorreviewtroops.Theyareworkingcarefullyalldayabout10hours.RecentlytheyaregettingtogethertoperformingintheeveningoftheweeknedontheTianAn’menSquare.Theyareworkinghardandwithouttiring,showntheunify,painstaking,braveryoftheyoungpeople.

Inthepastyears,ChinahasachievedmanygreatShenzhouspacecraftVandShenzhouspacecraftⅥ,totheouterspace.OnAug8st2008,itsucceededinholdtheOlympicGamesinBeijing.TheWenchuanearthquakemadeusmoreadmaney.Althoughtheproblemoffinancetomakeeverynationalfeelconfusedandunabletounderstandit,Chinesepeopledealwithitanddevelopingoureconomy.

SoChinawillstorgerandstorger,ItisnotdefeatedbyallthethesethingsandthepeopleofChinaricherandrichermtheirlifeisnappinessandharmonious.

陈廷武回答:
  ChineseNationalDayin2009   Oct1st2009isaworthyfuldaytoremember,thedayisthe60thNationalDayofChina.   Earlierthisyear,manyofpeoplebegantoprepareforit.Forexample,myyoungersisterparticipatedintheinspectorreviewtroops.Theywereworkinghard10hoursaday.RecentlytheygettogethertoperformintheeveningoftheweekendontheTianAn’menSquare.Theyareworkinghardandwithouttiring,showntheunited,painstaking,braveryoftheyoungpersons.(这句完全不知道你要表达的是什么意思,如果有需要请把中文发出来)   Inthepastfewyears,Chinahasmanygreatachievments,likeShenzhouspacecraftVandShenzhouspacecraftⅥwhichsendtotheouterspace.OnAug8st2008,ChinawasholdingtheOlympicGamessuccessfullyinBeijing.TheWenchuanearthquakemadeallchinesepeoplemiserable.AlthoughthefinancialproblemofrebuildWenchuanmaymakeeveryothercountiesfeelimpossible,ChinesepeoplemadeitandalsomakeaincredibleincreasinginourGDPthatyear.   AndChinawillgrowstrongerandstronger,Itwon'tdefeatedbyanything.AndChinesepeoplebecomericherandricherandtheirlifeisfullofhappiness.   我已经帮你改完了.自己看看吧.我改完的水平最少也是4级水平.   你的语法和用词可能还需要多加练习.如果还有什么问题可以继续发问.
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