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大家帮忙给我的托福综合写作打下分,如果能有点评更好阅读讲了neanderthals能说话,而lecture反对了这一点ThereadingsectionarguesthatNeanderthals,atypeofprehistoryhuman,hadtheabilitytoconveytheirideasthrou
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大家帮忙给我的托福综合写作打下分,如果能有点评更好

阅读讲了neanderthals能说话,而lecture反对了这一点

ThereadingsectionarguesthatNeanderthals,atypeofprehistoryhuman,hadtheabilitytoconveytheirideasthroughspeaking,butthelecturetotallyopposesthereadingandinsiststheNeanderthalscannotspeak.

Firstofall,thelecturedisagreeswiththeopinionraisedinthereadingsectionthattheNeanderthalscanspeakbecausetheyhadalargecranialcapacity.Theprofessorsaysit’sthecomplexitybutnotthecapacitythatmayenabletheNeanderthalstospeak.

Secondly,althoughthelectureacknowledgesaspecifictypeofbonedoexistsinaNeanderthals’body,aswellasthereadingpassage.However,thelecturedoesnotholdthesamepointwiththereadingthatthisbonecanpermittheNeanderthalstospeak,sincesomemonkeysalsohavetheexactsameboneyettheyobviouslycannottalk.

Furthermore,thepassagementionsthatNeanderthalsbarevariousmusclesintheirstomachregionwhichenabledNeanderthalstospeak.ThelecturecountersthisideabypointingouttheNeanderthalslivedinamuchharsherenvironmentthanwedonow,sothesemusclescanbeusedtofacilitatethemtotrekorclimbamountain.

Ingeneral,thelecturerefutesthethreemeanreasonssuggestsinthereadingsection,anddisagreeswiththegistofthereading,anddrawstheconclusionthattheNeanderthalsactuallycannotspeak.

孙晓东回答:
  20分没问题.模版运用太明显,字数不够
孙琼回答:
  一个综合写作不是0-5分吗
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