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阅读讲了neanderthals能说话,而lecture反对了这一点
ThereadingsectionarguesthatNeanderthals,atypeofprehistoryhuman,hadtheabilitytoconveytheirideasthroughspeaking,butthelecturetotallyopposesthereadingandinsiststheNeanderthalscannotspeak.
Firstofall,thelecturedisagreeswiththeopinionraisedinthereadingsectionthattheNeanderthalscanspeakbecausetheyhadalargecranialcapacity.Theprofessorsaysit’sthecomplexitybutnotthecapacitythatmayenabletheNeanderthalstospeak.
Secondly,althoughthelectureacknowledgesaspecifictypeofbonedoexistsinaNeanderthals’body,aswellasthereadingpassage.However,thelecturedoesnotholdthesamepointwiththereadingthatthisbonecanpermittheNeanderthalstospeak,sincesomemonkeysalsohavetheexactsameboneyettheyobviouslycannottalk.
Furthermore,thepassagementionsthatNeanderthalsbarevariousmusclesintheirstomachregionwhichenabledNeanderthalstospeak.ThelecturecountersthisideabypointingouttheNeanderthalslivedinamuchharsherenvironmentthanwedonow,sothesemusclescanbeusedtofacilitatethemtotrekorclimbamountain.
Ingeneral,thelecturerefutesthethreemeanreasonssuggestsinthereadingsection,anddisagreeswiththegistofthereading,anddrawstheconclusionthattheNeanderthalsactuallycannotspeak.