急,麻烦各位帮我看看这篇作文有什么语病吗,谢谢
TodayisSaturdaySeptember3rd2011.WhenIgotupat6:45,itissolittletimeformetocatchtheearlybusthatihadtoridetoschoolinahurry.Whenigottoschool,therewasmanystudentsstandingintheschoolgatebecausetheschoolclosed.Myfriendandidecidedtohaveapicnicintheparkandwedidnotgohomeuntilmymothercalledmegoinghomebybus.Nowitis9:00anditistimeforgoingtobed.大致意思是今天是2011年9月3日,星期六早晨6点45分起床,匆忙去上学,学校停课.然后和几个同学去野餐,乘车回家.9点睡觉.