高中英语改错,我只能找到七处,呜呜.
ItwasmyfirstMid-AutumnFestivalspentwithmyparentswhenIwas12.Intheearlymorning,myparentsandIwenttothezooatourcar.Therewerealotofvisitorsstoodinthefrontofthebox-cofficewindow.Wewaitedalongtimeandbuythreetickets.IntheTigerMountainofthepark,IwastooeagertoseethefiercelyfrightenedanimalsthatIquickenedmystepsthroughthecrowd.Unfortunately,Igotseparatedfrommyparents.Ihadhardtimelookingforhim,butIhadnoluck.Wanderinginthepark,Ifeltalonewithoutanycompaions.Worseill,Ihadnomoney,soIhadtowalkhome,coveredasmuchas5kilometers.