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Nowadays,aheateddiscussionspringsupastowhetherhighereducationbeavailabletoallstudentsoronlytogoodstudents.Somepeoplebelievethatacollegeoruniversityeducationshouldbeavailabletoallstudents.Whileothersbelievesitshouldbeavailableonlytogoodstudents.IfIwereforcedtoagreewithoneofthetwoselections.Istronglydeemthattheformeroneholdsmoreweight.TherearenumerousreasonstosupportmyopinionandIwouldexploreonlyafewofthemostimportantoneshere.
Oneoftheprimarycausesisthatallthepeoplehavetheequalrighttoreceivehighereducation.InChina,anoldsayingsgoes“allthepeople,nomatterwhatraceyouarefrom,havetheequalright.AndIthinkitincludestherighttoreceivehighereducationforeveryone.AgoodcaseinpointisthatinSouthKorea,thegovernmentadvocatedthatallthekoreanhavetherighttoreceiveeducation.Althoughsomerichpeoplemayrejectthiscreed,nearlyallthepopleinKoreasupportthisdecisionmadebygovernment.Thuswecanseethatmostpeopleagreewithmyfirstpoint.
Anotherreasontosupportmyopinionisthatanation’squalitywouldbepromotedifallthepeoplereceivehighereducation.Inotherwords,knowledge,abilityandsoonwillnotbepromotedifonlygoodstudentsreceivehighereducation.Wecanassumethatifonlyafewpeoplehavetherighttoreceiveeducation,andthenitisreasonabletoexpectthatthenationwouldnottobeastrongcountry,becausemostpeoplehavenoknowledgeorskilltosupporttheirnation.
Whileitistruethattheremaybeacoupleofadvantagesforonlyafewpeopletoreceivehigheducation.Howeverfromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,alltheevidencesupportsanunshakablethathighereducationshouldopentoallthepeople.Thusitisrecommendedthatgovernmentshouldincreasetheexpenseofeducationtosupportthispoint.Whileitisuptothemtomakethefinaldecisionwhichisinaccordancewiththeirvalueandsituation.