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【两篇英语稿,求帮忙修改啊、、在线等MyoutlookstoriesHello,everyone,ItwasthefirsttimethatItookpartinsuchaformalcompetition.Afterlayersofselection,Ifinallystandinginthefinalstage.Therewasai】
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两篇英语稿,求帮忙修改啊、、在线等

Myoutlookstories

Hello,everyone,ItwasthefirsttimethatItookpartinsuchaformalcompetition.Afterlayersofselection,Ifinallystandinginthefinalstage.

Therewasaincidentamongthecompetition.Afterthequarter–final,Iclickedonthefinallistofplayerswithaexpectant,nervousheart.Suddenly,apotofcoldwatersplashed,Iwasnotinthelist.

Thescoreofthestudentwhointhebottomofthelistis83.33,just0.23pointshigherthanme,0.23points,IthoughtI’dmissedthefinals.

AsIcomfortmyselfthat“focusonparticipation”,theteacherinOrganizingCommitteecalledmeandtoldmethatIampromotion,withjust0.23pointsgapandthetopofcandidates,Ireceivedthechancetoenterthefinals.

Itreasurethischancebecauseit’shard-won,Iwillbemorehardtoreturnparents’support,classmates’encourageandteacher’sbelief.

郭文革回答:
  Myoutlookstories   Hello,everyoneitisthefirsttimethatItakepartinsuchaformalcompetition.Afterlayersofselection,Ifinallystandinginthefinalstage.   Therewasanincidentbetweenthecompetition.Afterthequarter-final,Iclickedonthefinallistofplayerswithanexpectant,nervousheart.Suddenly,apotofcoldwatersplashed,mynamewasnotonthelist.   Thescoreofthestudentwhointhebottomofthelistis83.33,just0.23pointshigherthanme,0.23points,IthoughtI'dmissthefinals.   AsIcomfortmyselfthat"focusonparticipation"theteacherinorganizingcommitteecalledmeandtoldmethatIampromotion,withjust0.23pointsgapandthetopofcandidates,Ireceivedthechancetoenterthefinals.   Itreasurethischancebecauseit'shard-won,Iwillbemorehardtoreturntoparents'support,classmates'encouragingandteacher'sbelief.
邓飞城回答:
  可不可以就整篇稿子给我提些建议呢?
郭文革回答:
  就可能口语化写吧大的错误倒是还好就我个人觉得表达可以更简洁利落些
邓飞城回答:
  不知道怎么改(>﹏<)明天就要演讲了,果断求帮忙
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