两篇英语稿,求帮忙修改啊、、在线等
Myoutlookstories
Hello,everyone,ItwasthefirsttimethatItookpartinsuchaformalcompetition.Afterlayersofselection,Ifinallystandinginthefinalstage.
Therewasaincidentamongthecompetition.Afterthequarter–final,Iclickedonthefinallistofplayerswithaexpectant,nervousheart.Suddenly,apotofcoldwatersplashed,Iwasnotinthelist.
Thescoreofthestudentwhointhebottomofthelistis83.33,just0.23pointshigherthanme,0.23points,IthoughtI’dmissedthefinals.
AsIcomfortmyselfthat“focusonparticipation”,theteacherinOrganizingCommitteecalledmeandtoldmethatIampromotion,withjust0.23pointsgapandthetopofcandidates,Ireceivedthechancetoenterthefinals.
Itreasurethischancebecauseit’shard-won,Iwillbemorehardtoreturnparents’support,classmates’encourageandteacher’sbelief.