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Themostbeneficialelectronicdevicetome
Intoday'selectronicdevicesarevery
developed,peoplemoreandmoredependentonelectronicdevices.Electronicdevices
areveryhardforpeopletodowithout.SodoI.Mysmartphoneisthe
electronicdevicethatismostbeneficialtome.Icannot
withoutit.
Thereasonforsmartphoneasmostbeneficialtomeisthat
smartphonehasalotoffunctions.Smart
phonesnotonlysend
textmessagesandtocallbutalso
beusedasacomputercandoalotofthings.Icanuseittocheckmyemail
andfacebook.AlsoIcanuseittowatchmovies,tolistentomusic,toplay
gamesandavailableonlinesearchsomethingSmartphonealsoasacamera,we
canconvenienttotake
pictureswithasmartphone.SmartphonealsoasaGPS,itcanleadmetogotoanywhere.And
soon.
Smartphoneisthemostbeneficial
tome.Iamsureinthefuturesmartphonefunctionwillbemorepowerfulthan
now,andmorepeopleusedit.