How I've changed
I'm Paul,a Grade 9student in No.1Middle School.I'll graduate this summer.I've changed a lot during the last three years.Inthepast,Iwasshort.Iwastooshytospeakinfrontofothers.【高分句型一】Iwalkedtoschool.I wasn'tinterestedinstudyandhatedtests,soIwasweakinallmysubjects.AandIwassilentinclassWhat'smore,Iplayedeverydayafterschool.(过去)
However,I'vechangedgreatlynow.I'mtall.IammoreoutgoingandI'mwillingtosharethingswithothersandIgetalongwellwithmyclassmates.Itakethebustoschool.Ilikestudyingand bravetoaskquestionsinclass. IstudysowellthatI'matopstudentinourclassnow.【高分句型二】Moreover,Itakeanactivepartinallkindsofschoolactivities.Lastterm,IevenwontheprizeintheschoolEnglishWritingCompetition.(改变后)
Ihopetogetbettergradesandgotoseniorhighschool.SoIwillstudyharderandlearnmore.(愿望和打算)