请老师帮忙点评一下这篇作文
Iliketothinkabout"lifeinthefuture".
Theenvironmentwillbemuchworsethanitisnow.Ibelievethetreewillbeless.Therewillbemoreandmorepeopleintheworld,buttheanimalswillbeless.AndIthinktherewillbemorebuildingsandmorecarsinanycountries.Themostimportantthingistherewillbemorewars,morepeopledieinthewars.Huamnevenwillcan'tbresthorsleep.
Ihopeweprotecttheearth.
我是一名初三的学生,因为快月考了,提前准备一下月考可能考到的作文题目.英语这一科的分数对我来说很重要,希望老师给这篇作文提一提意见,谢谢O(∩_∩)O~