请大家帮我看看这篇2012年安徽省中考英语作文有没有错误
Weallwanttomakemorefriends,buthowtogetonwellwithothers?Somestudentsthinkweshouldlearntoshare.Sharingthingswhichwelikeisagoodwayforustogetonwellwithothers.otherstudentsthinkit'simportantforustorespectothers.Anotherimportantthingisthatcommunicatingwitheachother.AndIhavesomedifferentsuggestions.Ithinkweshouldbepolitewhenwetalkwithothers.Aboveall,Ibelieveifwearehonest,wewillgetonwellwithothersandmakefriendseasily.