语法有什么错误,
Dad,pleaserideyourbicycletowork
IwanttosaytomyDad.Heisveryfat.Heusuallygotoworkbyhisowncar.Somethingwithontfaultswillneverbefound.Althoughcarisveryconvenient,itisveryharmfultohishealth.Becauseofthis,hebecomesfatterandunhealthier.Ithinkheshouldridehisbicycletowork.First,Ourhomeisnearhiscompany.it`snoneedtobycar.Then,ridebicyleisgoodforhishealth.Althoughitistired,it`sawayoflosehisweight.Keeptryingnomatterhowhanditseems,itwillgeteasier.Ithinkyoucan,Dad.Ibelievryou.
单词或句型有错麻烦纠正一下,