Onepossibleversion:(Inmylife,Igetlotsofhelpandlovefrommanypeople.NowIwanttoexpressmythankstothem.First,)Iwanttothankmyparents.Theyprovideahappylifeforme.Theydomuchformeandgivemesomuchlove.Second,Iwanttothankmyteachers.WhenIhaveproblemsinmystudies,theyaresopatientandhelpful.Third,Iwanttothankmyclassmates.TheymakemefeellesslonelyandgivemeawarmhandwhenIamintrouble..Iwillneverforgetthedayswhenweplayandstudytogether.Thankyouverymuch,myparents,myteachersandmyclassmates.Ihopeyouareallingoodhealthandliveahappylife.
考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一般现在时,所以在写作时,要尤其注意一般现在时的表达方式。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少.如:Iwanttothankmyparents.heymakemefeellesslonelyandgivemeawarmhandwhenIamintrouble.Ihopeyouareallingoodhealthandliveahappylife.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。考点: